Battles Poem by JoAnn McGrath
Battles
Battles
Everyday could be a battle won or lost
And sometimes we must pay the cost
But sometimes when we win a few
It changes our day to a brighter hue
Either way....win or lose
We still learn what we need to do
2 Feb 2008
Battles are the way of life, I wonder if some ones keeping score in the after life..?
JoAnn, top marks for a start, loved this one as I'm in the same sentiment as you. Thanks for sharing this lil sis. Big Bruv
Nice write JoAnn! ! You'll win the battle every time, with your wit and with your rime! ! Best wishes Friend Thad
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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I think the first line is excellent, 'everyday could be a battle' with the operatlive word being 'could', therefore we can change that whole thing and make sure that everyday is a positive experience and not a baattle because we are after all in charge of our own destiny. I prefer to think that 'everyday is a blessing'. That's just the way I see it. Very good write JoJo. Melvina