Kumarmani Mahakul

Gold Star - 219,109 Points (Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA)

Be Cautious To Lead The Life - Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

God father says, ” Sweet children!
Don’t always gab,
Keep silence and think deeply
About your life-cab.

You know you have several births
It is one of them,
It depends upon your action
You may be a gem.

Good action (karma) brings sweet fruits
It gives pleasure to all,
Strife and swindle give pain
It brings the person gall.

As per karma (action) you enjoy
The way of life on earth,
Be cautious to lead the life
You are on the firth.

You can’t bring back the past
But you can only realize,
Deeply envision yourselves
Get root and finalize.

Then you will come sure
To the conclusion in hope,
Virtuous deeds are eternal
These have splendid scope.”

Topic(s) of this poem: spirituality

Poet's Notes about The Poem

This is a spiritual poem. In this poem poet on behalf of God addressing children says, “Sweet children! Do not have chit chat always. Keep silence and think about your life. You have to take rebirth. So you must do good works. According to our karma we have to enjoy the fruits. Good karma gives good result and bad gives bad.You can’t bring back the past. You should not think about the past. Think the present and do noble work. Virtuous deeds are eternal and these have splendid scope.” This is the theme of the poem in nutshell. This is written in Deogarh, Odisha, India and dedicated to the people of the world.
Cab – tax
Gem – a person who is brilliant and precious as a piece of jewellery
Firth - estuary

Comments about Be Cautious To Lead The Life by Kumarmani Mahakul

  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (3/18/2015 4:16:00 PM)

    Good actions lead to good results. Beautiful message delivered. (Report) Reply

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  • Hazel Durham (3/18/2015 11:21:00 AM)

    A wonderful message to children to do good and they will find happiness as doing good uplifts and brings joy to our hearts! (Report) Reply

  • (3/17/2015 1:32:00 PM)

    Do unto others as you would like them do unto you. Another great message, from a wise man. (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rai (3/16/2015 12:02:00 AM)

    Life is given once and we need to make it fruitful. A nice poem conveying a worthy message. Thanks for sharing. Regards. (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad (3/15/2015 7:15:00 PM)

    A great spiritual message that enlightens the paths of the children.........................10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, March 14, 2015

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