Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 389,843 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Be Commoner - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

As commoner

You have nothing to own
than to make it known
to entire world
what has not been told

it is your personality
that makes super quality
among friends and relatives
about being subjective

try not to influence
with your presence
that your good at everything
but can deliver nothing

this mars your chance of being shown
and makes it drawn
with no relevance for public good
you will stand where you stood earlier

so come in open
with self driven
ambition to be simple and sober
and lead as commoner

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, January 24, 2016



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