Be Here Poem by Will Barber

Be Here

Rating: 5.0


Although the day was full of grace,
I frowned because your face
Was not there.

The sky was denim-blue,
The breeze cloying, but you
Were not there.

Summer comes apace;
I would rejoice,
Were you here.

Clouds close the sky,
Again; this is why I
Need you here.


2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

well penned poem about longing for someone to be near!

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Sally Carter 25 June 2009

Warm, and charming in its simplicity. I like this very much.

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Sandra Fowler 22 May 2009

The art of simplicity beautifully displayed. I like your denim blue sky. Take care. As always, Sandra

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Esther Leclerc 18 May 2009

Simply beautiful, evocative - wonderful.

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Luis Gil 22 April 2009

Clean lines to let feelings flow. The weather is a mirror and a lamp. It shows and illuminates feelings. A breeze of truth. May the sun keep shining, Will.

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