Sally Plumb Plumb

Silver Star - 3,311 Points (23 9 1940 / Haverhill Suffolk England)

Be Kind Be Sweet - Poem by Sally Plumb Plumb

Let his eyes net,
net her,
his sweet sweat,
sweat her,
without threat
take her
into a place of light.

With golden light
face her,
in silver light
lace her,
never, never trace her
into the darkness
of the grave
she craves.

Comments about Be Kind Be Sweet by Sally Plumb Plumb

  • Heather Wilkins (10/6/2013 9:57:00 AM)

    a good poem Sally. a great play on words. (Report) Reply

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  • (4/14/2012 2:42:00 PM)

    A great poem, like it. (Report) Reply

  • Vipins Puthooran (12/9/2011 5:33:00 AM)

    [Excellent depiction]
    An amazing poem! ! !
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  • Unwritten Soul (7/7/2011 9:02:00 AM)

    This kind sound sweet when you say be kind mean you so it it really a simple but triple smiles :) _Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • (3/12/2011 8:32:00 AM)

    Really glad I found this poem, you are a talented writer that's for sure. (Report) Reply

  • (8/26/2010 1:28:00 AM)

    Sweet kindness light her face beguile her with your scent [sweat]...very nice words here
    from a Sally I've just met.glad I dropped by,
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  • (6/8/2010 11:16:00 AM)

    Wonderful yet deep poem. Enjoyed the read. D (Report) Reply

  • Raj Arumugam (5/25/2010 6:00:00 PM)

    The rhythm is lovely and apt and the diction, the particular way you use words like 'sweat' and so forth is just so enchanting poem, Sally (Report) Reply

  • (5/25/2010 12:18:00 PM)

    Wonderful word play blended with feeling emotion…
    Thanks Ma’am for such a poem
    Ms. Nivedita
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  • (8/19/2009 2:26:00 AM)

    sweet, romantic and sensitive poem, ..............u surely know how to net the readers........ (Report) Reply

  • (7/21/2009 7:09:00 AM)

    great poem Sally - dark romance. Magnetic. N (Report) Reply

  • (7/9/2009 1:21:00 AM)

    an heart rendering poem....... be kind be sweet.written from the heart....... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, July 8, 2009

Poem Edited: Thursday, July 7, 2011

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