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Be Kind Be Sweet

Rating: 4.8

Let his eyes net,
net her,
his sweet sweat,
sweat her,
without threat
take her
into a place of light.

With golden light
face her,

in silver light
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather Wilkins 06 October 2013

a good poem Sally. a great play on words.

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Sally P. P. 07 June 2019

Thank you for your comment. Much appreciated. Sally

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Dave Walker 14 April 2012

A great poem, like it.

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Sally P. P. 07 June 2019

Nice to hear from you, Dave. Thanks. Sally.

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Vipins Puthooran 09 December 2011

[Excellent depiction] An amazing poem! ! !

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Sally P. P. 03 April 2020

Thankyou, Vipins, much appreciated remark x

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Unwritten Soul 07 July 2011

This kind sound sweet when you say be kind mean you so sweet..like it it really a simple but triple smiles :) _Unwritten Soul

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Lay P. P. 04 April 2020

Thanks for you happy comment x

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Jess Silva 12 March 2011

Really glad I found this poem, you are a talented writer that's for sure.

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Sally P. P. 16 April 2020

A lovely comment, Jess. Thankyou.

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Ken E Hall 26 August 2010

Sweet kindness light her face beguile her with your scent [sweat]...very nice words here from a Sally I've just met.glad I dropped by, regards

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Sally P. P. 16 April 2020

Lovely to hear from you, Ken.

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Wonderful yet deep poem. Enjoyed the read. D

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Sally P. P. 16 April 2020

Hi! Denise, Thankyou for your interest.

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Raj Arumugam 25 May 2010

The rhythm is lovely and apt and the diction, the particular way you use words like 'sweat' and so forth is just so enchanting....an enchanting poem, Sally

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Sally P. P. 16 April 2020

Hello Raj. Thankyou very much for your comment.

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Wonderful word play blended with feeling emotion… Thanks Ma’am for such a poem 10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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SallyP. P. 03 April 2020

Thanks, Niv. How are you?

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Nikunj Sharma 19 August 2009

sweet, romantic and sensitive poem, ..............u surely know how to net the readers........

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Sally P. P. 03 April 2020

Thanks for your lovely comment, Nikiunj. x

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