Let his eyes net,
his sweet sweat,
into a place of light.
With golden light
in silver light
never, never trace her
into the darkness
of the grave
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
a good poem Sally. a great play on words.
Thank you for your comment. Much appreciated. Sally
A great poem, like it.
Nice to hear from you, Dave. Thanks. Sally.
An amazing poem! ! !
Thankyou, Vipins, much appreciated remark x
This kind sound sweet when you say be kind mean you so sweet..like it it really a simple but triple smiles :) _Unwritten Soul
Thanks for you happy comment x
Really glad I found this poem, you are a talented writer that's for sure.
A lovely comment, Jess. Thankyou.
Sweet kindness light her face beguile her with your scent [sweat]...very nice words here
from a Sally I've just met.glad I dropped by,
Lovely to hear from you, Ken.
Wonderful yet deep poem. Enjoyed the read. D
Hi! Denise, Thankyou for your interest.
The rhythm is lovely and apt and the diction, the particular way you use words like 'sweat' and so forth is just so enchanting....an enchanting poem, Sally
Hello Raj. Thankyou very much for your comment.
Wonderful word play blended with feeling emotion…
Thanks Ma’am for such a poem
Thanks, Niv. How are you?
sweet, romantic and sensitive poem, ..............u surely know how to net the readers........
Thanks for your lovely comment, Nikiunj. x
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