Lisa Cresswell Wilkinson

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Beaches - Poem by Lisa Cresswell Wilkinson

Like a twinkle of water
A splashing of rain
A silent moment
Upon us again

Watching you sit by the window ledge
Waiting for you by the waters edge

You travelled the beach
On the sand you did sprint
Step by step leaving your print

Together at last we were never to part
Filling soulfully our warming hearts

We were finally together
By the cool calm sea
When I needed you there
You guided me


Comments about Beaches by Lisa Cresswell Wilkinson

  • (3/30/2007 4:33:00 PM)


    Lisa, yet another beautiful poem. I like the first stanza. Clever images here. Top marks from me. Thanks for sharing it my friend.
    David
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  • (7/14/2006 5:17:00 AM)


    Watching you sit by the window ledge
    Waiting for you by the waters edge

    You travelled the beach
    On the sand you did sprint
    Step by step leaving your print

    Together at last we were never to part
    the talent and hard work makes the poem, really you are talented and good for writing a poem
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  • (7/9/2006 11:19:00 PM)


    Lisa, I like your 'twinkle of water'. I too am a fan of the beach and I love the heady mix of water, sand and sun. Yes the sea certainly has the power to evoke beautiful memories which you show us in this poem. Thanks. love, Alison XXX (Report) Reply

  • (5/28/2006 5:41:00 PM)


    Beautiful and timeless your words skipped across the page as ballet to the dancer
    Beautiful swan on lake
    Love duncan X
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  • (5/15/2006 9:22:00 AM)


    well writen poem, I wish someday I could write poem really good. I like going to hte beach to make foot prints in the sand sooooooooooo cool. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 11, 2006

Poem Edited: Thursday, April 26, 2007


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