Beaches Poem by Lisa Cresswell Wilkinson

Beaches

Rating: 4.8


Like a twinkle of water
A splashing of rain
A silent moment
Upon us again

Watching you sit by the window ledge
Waiting for you by the waters edge

You travelled the beach
On the sand you did sprint
Step by step leaving your print

Together at last we were never to part
Filling soulfully our warming hearts

We were finally together
By the cool calm sea
When I needed you there
You guided me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Harris 30 March 2007

Lisa, yet another beautiful poem. I like the first stanza. Clever images here. Top marks from me. Thanks for sharing it my friend. David

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Kee Thampi 14 July 2006

Watching you sit by the window ledge Waiting for you by the waters edge You travelled the beach On the sand you did sprint Step by step leaving your print Together at last we were never to part the talent and hard work makes the poem, really you are talented and good for writing a poem

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Alison Cassidy 09 July 2006

Lisa, I like your 'twinkle of water'. I too am a fan of the beach and I love the heady mix of water, sand and sun. Yes the sea certainly has the power to evoke beautiful memories which you show us in this poem. Thanks. love, Alison XXX

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Duncan Wyllie 28 May 2006

Beautiful and timeless your words skipped across the page as ballet to the dancer Beautiful swan on lake Love duncan X

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Tracey Collins 15 May 2006

well writen poem, I wish someday I could write poem really good. I like going to hte beach to make foot prints in the sand sooooooooooo cool.

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