Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 389,843 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Beautiful And Great - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

"Karina, you are lovely, beautiful and great"
But is it so real that I am so late
She was surprised to hear and stared
I was little in odd position when had dared

She is fine lady and belongs to good culture
Where she considers all friends and makes sure
Dignity stands all the way and holds the ground
Whether it is new people, new area or culture to be found

I saw eyes but failed to read what it tried
For a second I felt shy, but suddenly asked why?
She is the entire time best friend
May give in and stay up to the end

Some of the people are gifted
Their eyes speak and never get shifted
It is not natural talent or any kind of show off
But person gets warning and it is made last laugh

I am always at receiving end and accept the outcome
Make the friends laugh at my funny things and welcome
I wait for no adverse comment or displeasure
As it always turn out to be great pleasure

Friends are meant to be adored and appreciated
Not made to suffer due to environment already vitiated
It is how you ouch their deep sentiments
Use it to fullest advantage and turn into happy moments

She has impressed with her innocent show
May be she is intelligent and willing to go
Yet it is her desire to be taken into account
We must love to create relation with almost sure count


Comments about Beautiful And Great by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/24/2012 9:37:00 AM)


    Bella Sáfrány lovely lady, ... and it's a so beautiful poem...
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/24/2012 9:37:00 AM)


    Ajit Sripad Rao Nalkur I hear you Hasmukh Mehta..lovely poem, lovely feeling :) Welcome to the group! :) :) ..lovely lady, too :)
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/24/2012 9:24:00 AM)


    Ezna Stephna
    A wonderful love poem about Karina, a woman you admired and loved. Excellent emotional writeup.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/24/2012 9:23:00 AM)


    “Karina, you are lovely, beautiful and great”
    But is it so real that I am so late
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 24, 2012



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