Beautiful Mind Poem by Tribhawan Kaul

Beautiful Mind



Dwelling in the crown
creating illusions through imagination
raising hopes and expectations
causing perplexity and confusion
an illusion as real as the truth
and the truth subject to perception
good and evil both vie for the supremacy
like the tortoise and the hare respectively
thoughts and actions playing in their hands
abetting the fight sometimes
clouding the sunshine
but not always.
Righteous
ultimately seeking the right path slowly
casting away the seven sins
the mind wins
like the tortoise.
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather Wilkins 30 May 2013

Sometimes the slow way there is the best and safest way. Time is the key.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 08 December 2012

True slow n steady right path wins d race! Amazing poem.

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The Reader 02 December 2012

This poem is the proof enough of your own beautiful mind and thought tribhawan ji.it is densely packed with meaning, not a single word is used as extra word.all pertinent n relevant.all positive powers are in your hands.it's so good that you think about others, take others with you, whether it is any festival, or a new-year...i like your thoughts and poetry a lot.wishing you happiness always.the reader

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Tribhawan Kaul

Tribhawan Kaul

Srinagar (J & K) India
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