Musing Of An Autistic Poem by Tribhawan Kaul

Musing Of An Autistic

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Love knows no boundaries yet lacks conviction
Wondering why the sea is noisy yet so calm
Shore allows waves to touch and back they go
Sand watch helplessly as none applies balm.

Thoughts merge misreading thoughts
Natural are weird ways to reverse actions
Mind seeks answers through hidden potentials
Ready to take off sans pretentions.

Ah! Can't beat the blues which come free
Hand me something to play and let you see
Acceptance makes me accepted, energizing me
Let the river flow why build dam over me?

Grappling with my mood swings, I enjoy
Look into my eyes and say ‘ahoy'
Learning curves may be like ECG
Life can't be smooth, so let it be.

Oh! Come now, let you understand
Reassuring touch make me stand
Complexities are boon and not to abhor
Open your arms and open your doors.

Fields ploughed, seeds grow emotions
Nourishment through parent's devotion
Watch me cross barriers of all kind
Sky is the limit for a beautiful mind.
Sky is the limit for a beautiful mind.
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Musing Of An Autistic
Thursday, May 25, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: autism
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The poem has been included in Differrent Truths anthology in April 2017. Autism is a disorder found specially in children have difficulties in communicating and interacting. It is a social problem which can be overcome with spreading awareness to understand and treat such children as normal.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rini Shibu 10 June 2017

Thanks for sharing this poem. It's our responsibility to support these children to attain their dreams and treat them as normal.they are children with high intelligence, great people who were autistic were Einstein, Newton.......Congratulations for being selected as poem of the day.

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Tribhawan Kaul 12 June 2017

Thank you dear poet for your presence on this poem of mine and your insightful comment. Thank for your good wishes too. Happy reading and writing.

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Tom Allport 10 June 2017

a wonderful poem that gives the reader some idea of what it might be like to have this health condition? ..........superbly written

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Tribhawan Kaul 12 June 2017

Loved your awaring comment dear poet. Thank you for your presence on this poem.

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Geetha Jayakumar 10 June 2017

A thought provoking write. I would like to bow the parents who accept when they know about their child. They deal with the child with lot of patience and care. Awareness should be created in society as well that these children need to be treated as normal. Beautiful write. Loved reading the poem with unique concept. Beauty flow in words.... Love knows no boundaries yet lacks conviction Wondering why the sea is noisy yet so calm Shore allows waves to touch and back they go Sand watch helplessly as none applies balm. Congratulations on member poem of the day. Thanks for sharing with us.

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Tribhawan Kaul 12 June 2017

Thank you Geetha Ji for visiting my page and your insightful comment on this poem. I appreciate your concern too towards this sort of disorder. Happy reading and writing.

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Jeannette Heywood 10 June 2017

Beautiful poem giving us a very useful insight into the autistic mind.

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Tribhawan Kaul 12 June 2017

I thank for your gracious presence on my poem and appreciating it. Happy reading and writing.

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Bharati Nayak 10 June 2017

Ah! Can't beat the blues which come free Hand me something to play and let you see Acceptance makes me accepted, energizing me Let the river flow why build dam over me? - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Oh! Come now, let you understand Reassuring touch make me stand Complexities are boon and not to abhor Open your arms and open your doors. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - A touching write about the children with autism.Thanks for spreading awareness through your wonderful poem.Congratulations for being Poet of the Day for a well deserving poem.

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Tribhawan Kaul 12 June 2017

It is so nice of you to have visited my page dear poet. I appreciate your concern through your poetic heart about autism. Thanks for good wishes. Happy reading and writing.

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Srinagar (J & K) India
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