Beautiful Soul Poem by Elena Toledo

Beautiful Soul

Rating: 4.8


The wilderness is her getaway; out of
civilization, away from pollutes and
stress, lives free like a soul without sin,
like butterflies and fairies; she dresses

soft, with color and textures of silk and
pastel. She can be spotted from a distance,
her moves like flying fairies captures the
eye. When she needs rest; she strips down

to pure nudeness, she lays on the fresh grass;
becoming the essences of a frame. She falls
asleep like a Goddess princes, she becomes
meaningful to every creatures sight. The young

pigeons come and gather petals and cover her
nakedness beauty. She walks away leaving
her unforgotten image in the eyes of one.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem was inspire by the beauty and freshness of youth.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Leslie Philibert 27 June 2013

Great write, a poem of quality.

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Elena Toledo 28 June 2012

Thank you to all the ones that read my work.?

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Gabhriel Londe 28 June 2012

Beautiflly created scene, but what's the story? I feel like I'm missing that. However, as I said, well written picture.

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Jasbir Chatterjee 28 June 2012

How well you put it, Elena! Loved it!

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Kaila George 27 June 2012

Congratulations for the poem of the day, and I understand why too, its like your painting a picture with your pen, bravo...look forward to reading more of your poems.

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Imaginative and dreaming like poem and it is nice.

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Colleen Courtney 27 June 2014

Such an incredibly beautiful poem! Whimsical and enchanting. Dreamy and mystical. Wonderfully written! Have added to my list of favorites!

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Mihaela Pirjol 27 June 2014

Lovely poem, beautiful imagery.Well done.

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Vassilis Comporozos 27 June 2014

She walks away leaving her unforgotten image in the eyes of one... What can one say about this piece of writing? poetic, dreamy, silky, loneliness in the realm of beauty

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Gajanan Mishra 27 June 2013

nakedness beauty, good write, thanks.

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