Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 421,198 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Beautiful Spots - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Beautiful spots

The life has lot more to witness
If it has to be considered as game of chase
Life shall pose sad affairs
Where it shall be called foolishness to expect fairness

Many people have lot many things to spend
Enjoy each moment and proudly stand
Go all over world and witness beautiful spots
As they have nothing to worry for any of such sorts

Ask common man about the continuation in journey
“Why such hardship to me only by almighty”?
I work 12hours under hot sun
Still from pillar to post I have to run

For so many people, it is like simple cake
They have nothing to fear as nothing is at stake
Everything is available and within reach
But for common man it is certainly beyond reach

Still life shall be taken as stiff challenge
Where it shall force all of us to engage
Keep field open but with enough of struggle
Our shall always be prepared to move along with the people

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/17/2015 11:04:00 AM)


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  • Shakil Ahmed (11/17/2015 10:19:00 AM)


    For so many people, it is like simple cake
    They have nothing to fear as nothing is at stake
    Everything is available and within reach
    But for common man it is certainly beyond reach
    Beautiful lines written by a great poet, your poem directly touches the heart, thanks for sharing.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/17/2015 10:02:00 AM)


    Still life shall be taken as stiff challenge
    Where it shall force all of us to engage
    Keep field open but with enough of struggle
    Our shall always be prepared to move along with the people
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, November 17, 2015



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