Soul Mate Poem by Black Mendilouche

Soul Mate

Rating: 3.0


Soul-mate stale-mate
yielding heart meets steel plate.
Sweet surrender soured by fate
always pining for that date.

(July 2009)

Sunday, July 19, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: fate,july
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Jarvis 26 July 2009

Minimal use of words to maximum effect - 'yielding heart meets steel plate' is superb. S :)

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Sally Carter 19 July 2009

Very clever use of words, particularly the first two lines. Like a bullet!

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