Beauty In You Is You Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Beauty In You Is You

Rating: 5.0


If most wondrous thing about world be world,
The charming most a charm in you is you.
I see this, my eyes with your beauty blurred,
Truth has own ways to show its truthful hue.
You might not this believe— head over heart,
The world may not in my belief me back,
Heart‘s all you back if head shows tricky art,
With heart therefore let me this crossword crack.
(I aught deal with women way as they are,
(And never once as I'd like them to be,
(There's one way man with women can go far:
(Calling puddles ponds, and if need be, sea!)
Sure, everything in you is doubtless beau,
And beauteous most spot in you is you.
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Sonnets | 07.06.14 |

Monday, June 10, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty,humour,husband
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A husband can never win argument with his wife if he cares for marital bliss, and never once in a bedroom. One such hubby in this sonnet succumbs, but he defends with his own logic.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Me Poet Yeps Poet 10 June 2019

(I aught deal with women way as they are, (And never once as I'd like them to be, (There's one way man with women can go far: (Calling puddles ponds, and if need be, sea!) Sure, everything in you is doubtless beau, I CAN SEE THE MOST SUCCESSFUL HUBBY IN YOU HOW I WISH ALL READ AND FOLLOW YOU READ MY FOOLISH POETRY JUST POSTED

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Aniruddha Pathak 11 June 2019

For, you can't be wiser than your 'better half'. So, by definition she wins, why try, waste time, and leave bad taste in mouth and mind. Thank you PP.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 June 2019

If most wondrous thing about world be world, The charming most a charm in you is you. I see this, my eyes with your beauty blurred, Truth has own ways to show its truthful hue......fantastic beginning. Touchng expression with lofty theme. Really it is a beautiful poem on beauty with humour. Thanks for sharing.10

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Aniruddha Pathak 11 June 2019

Thank you Kumarmani Mahakul for liking it and rating it so high.

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Godhra - Gujarat
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