Because You Were Sleeping. Poem by Solomon Terlumun Tule

I like the use of repetition in this piece--it 'enhanced' the feeling of evil intent of the enemy who lives to sow discord and hatred---a stunning novel approach and an extremely im, portant topic---5 star rating and putting on my fav list--thank you for writing and sharing this piece

I appreciate poetess Susan. She has put here an excellent comment. I have no power to go beyond it....5 stars.

Thank you ma'am Susan. Your comments are always appreciated.

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Thank you dear poet Anjandev Roy.

Such a brilliant piece.....thank u

This is simply brilliant.....

We are a vineyard, when we don't keep the vine active in God the enemy plants the bad seeds of condemnation and corruption.

You have great analytical skills of poems dear poetess Susan. Thank you once more.