Because You Were Sleeping. Poem by Solomon Terlumun Tule

Because You Were Sleeping.

Rating: 5.0


when you were busy sleeping,
the enemy planted the seed
the seed of destruction
the seed of discord
the enemy went laughing
because you were sleeping
and he planted the seed
the seed of backwardness
the seed of delay
the enemy continued laughing
because you were sleeping
he continued planting
many harmful seeds.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 17 October 2021

I like the use of repetition in this piece--it 'enhanced' the feeling of evil intent of the enemy who lives to sow discord and hatred---a stunning novel approach and an extremely im, portant topic---5 star rating and putting on my fav list--thank you for writing and sharing this piece

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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 October 2021

I appreciate poetess Susan. She has put here an excellent comment. I have no power to go beyond it....5 stars.

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Solomon Terlumun Tule 18 October 2021

Thank you ma'am Susan. Your comments are always appreciated.

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Solomon Terlumun Tule 18 October 2021

Great poet Dr Dillip K S, I feel elated and humble to have your comments on my work. Thank you.

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Solomon Terlumun Tule 06 December 2021

Thank you dear poet Anjandev Roy.

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Anjandev Roy 04 December 2021

Such a brilliant piece.....thank u

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Anjandev Roy 04 December 2021

This is simply brilliant.....

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Solomon Terlumun Tule 20 October 2021

We are a vineyard, when we don't keep the vine active in God the enemy plants the bad seeds of condemnation and corruption.

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Solomon Terlumun Tule 18 October 2021

You have great analytical skills of poems dear poetess Susan. Thank you once more.

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