Before I Die................ Poem by lalitha iyer

Before I Die................



Before I die
I want to meet you
like a kid
aching to touch
the toys in rows
along the market windows

Before I die
I want to touch you
with the soft hands
of a touch me not plant
a last touch that shall end me up
a last attempt to die in somebody's cup.

Before I die
I want to tell you
that you are my dawns
and dusks and dreams
I was with you all these years
and I grew up with those hours
when I was inhaling your pours

Before I die
I wish I could hold
that moment when I could see
in your looks the golden glee
that make my existence sure
and life immortal and pure
to ashes into the real pyre
into the flames of consuming tear...........

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rakesh Bedi 03 November 2009

i dont know lalitha; to me it is an devotional poem......the last stanza confused me as to what do you want to convey....if possible dear, kindly elaborate....yes, an extremwely devotional poem it is, i could be in your shoes....

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Catrina Heart 03 November 2009

wonderful theme....well done! ! ! poignant and well structured! ! !

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rago rago 03 November 2009

fine write...............

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Vijay Menon 03 November 2009

you poem is good you made me cry i dont know why what makes you sad 10++++

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