A New Desire Poem by lalitha iyer

A New Desire

Rating: 5.0


A new lust
seeded yester night
during sleep
by hands unseen
in the fertile soil
lying within deep
all afresh
as I woke up
saplings of love
mushroomed in my breasts
softly I caressed
the lovely little things
dreams have come true
yes, poppy plants they are
intoxicating me
with luxuriant vapour

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Seun Abayomi 12 May 2009

its lovely. i love the comment

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I woke up saplings of love mushroomed in my breasts softly I caressed the lovely little things dreams have come true..... what motherly feeling madame.. genuine one....take 10 from me

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a lovely desire and a beautiful depiction! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 02 October 2009

i enjoyed the wording.10 shan

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Braja K Sarkar 19 March 2010

Nice poem! I like it.thanks Lalitha..

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Chinedu Dike 24 November 2019

Well expressed thoughts and feelings. An insightful piece of poetry written from the heart. Thanks for sharing, Lalitha.

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 04 September 2015

Short and simple yet ravishingly intoxicating write. Raises goose-pimples of exciting poppy all over.

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Sekharan Pookkat 24 May 2015

An intoxicating write turns into warm emotion of a mother ten/ten

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Geetha Jayakumar 04 May 2015

A Wonderful poem Lalitha. Poem itself is intoxicating indeed. Beautiful presentation. Loved reading it.

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IamNo body 18 May 2010

Intoxicating indeed!

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