Before The Sun Goes Down Poem by Jez Burl

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Before The Sun Goes Down

Rating: 5.0

in pensive mood
she stands like cypress
waiting for the sun
to meet the silent sea

unaware of his presence
behind her back
as she whispers
'darling, meet me at sunset'

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Enjoyed reading this beautiful piece

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Anjandev Roy 28 November 2024

This is simply outstanding piece.... thanks for sharing..

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Jez Burl 29 November 2024

Thank you for your uplifting feedback. : )

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 28 November 2024

Amazing Poem TFS Bravo! ! ! ! !

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Jez Burl 29 November 2024

Thank you. : )

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Dr Dillip K Swain 28 November 2024

A fabulous poem....appreciated the fantastic whisper, ''darling, meet me at sunset'

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Jez Burl 29 November 2024

Thank you Dr Dillip for your appreciation and warm feedback.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 01 September 2024

A beautiful poem well crafted embellished with great imagery

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Jez Burl 29 November 2024

Thank you ate Rose.. : )

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