Saturday, March 30, 2013

Before You Bid Adieu Comments

Rating: 5.0

O sweet breathe of life
Stay with me a little longer
Be my companion
I still have to find the bird
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Savita Tyagi
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Akhtar Jawad 10 March 2015

A real poetry, an amazing beauty...............................10

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The sun may set and darkness enclose Forever one fine day for us to float To better spheres with sweeter airs When we our faults and good honestly disclose..... Very good write Madam. Even beyond the mysterious curtain there is hope.

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 01 April 2013

full imagination, full emotion melt in your words make this poem flow nicely and enjoy to read amazing, thanks for sharing

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