Beginning Depths Poem by RoseAnn V. Shawiak

Beginning Depths



Watching clouds being darkened in shadows, penetrating the sky
where the sun is now setting, saying good night to everyone
on earth.

Succulent and pure, the beauty of dusk falls upon us all so
silently that we never realize until suddenly it has become
another darkened black night.

Experiencing the serenity of it's passing each evening brings
a sense of spirituality quietly into our souls, feeling the
presence of the divine lingering in our minds, taking us into
beginning depths of our faithful spirits.

Thursday, January 12, 2017
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Daniel Brick 13 January 2017

Your poem tenderly traces the way to spiritual peace by way of nature appreciation. It is open to the miraculous good in nature that makes the spirit pure and whole. There is not just spiritual peace at the end, but also the readiness to do whatever comes next. It's all expressed in the most ele, emta; language, never calling attention to itself, but being the vehicle to the higher truth.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 13 January 2017

'Of the divine lingering in our minds, spirituality, faithful spirits' admire how u mention n phrase that poetess. Kudos for a poem awesome in reflection and imagery too. Nice to read from your pen again, hope u read my latest too, tiled riverbank

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