Beginning Of My Eternal Night Poem by Kaushik Khamrui
Beginning Of My Eternal Night
You didn't stay longer to see the moon cry,
A few molten drops wanted to plunge on the lids of your closened eye.
Waiting for a while, those shattered on the floor!
The splatters drenched me - like tsunami on a shore,
You faded in the dark, and left no trail.
The sun appeared slowly, but my night turned eternal!
To me this poem is very poetic and i personally think the style is very nice and fit me, keep it up for more poem :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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8/30/2026 12:37:26 AM # rel_20260827T145718Z_a0f1bd3
Welcome to Poem Hunter, Kaushik! This seems to be the first poem you have posted on this site. Looking forward to reading more of your poems in the future. The rhyme is perfect in the first four lines, but then the last two lines don't really rhyme. Still, a nice effort for a first poem. Write more!