Beginning Of The End (Part 1) Poem by Christine Kerr

Beginning Of The End (Part 1)

Rating: 5.0


Should I take the time to explain,
Playing house was just a game.
You were expecting a mouse in our new life?
Aiming t to control me as your new wife?

How could I give you what you desire,
When you forced me to play with fire.
You hit me once, that was my clue,
-'Do it again, we will be through.'

Like two trains colliding in the night
Could expect there, to be a good fight,
You tried to belittle me in front of your clan,
-'Surprise, Surprise, I'm still looking for a man.'

It was your plan to drive me nuts,
So you could squander away my big bucks.
Your plan was to get it on a silver platter,
I was slow to realize that my love didn't matter.

Charging my Visa as high as you could,
I went to the bank and froze all the goods.

I had enough, You pushed me too far.
Quietly, I was soul ownership of our new car.
I'm not a rag doll for you to do with as you please.
My way was to get even with a smile of ease.

To make an impression,
You would be little me with disgrace,
Laugh at my misfortunes
Purposely get in my face.

Painting the house, was your plan every three years.
-'Why'? was my question, -'When only your bum boys were here.'
The double meanings, made you rack your brain.
Guess who now, has started a new game.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Louis Rams 11 June 2009

touche! don't ever let anyone put you down, even a mouse can make a sound. you picked yourself up when he tried to knock you down because of the inner strength that you found. I LOVE IT. A TEN

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Great work Christine. Nobody is going to pull the wool over your eyes. I will read the next part soon. Your words are clever and smart and a lot of information has gone into this piece. Goodonya! 10 Karin Anderson

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T McH 14 June 2009

Ye gods. You read my mind and heart and put it into words better than I ever could. On to part 2. ******* brilliant. t x

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Afzal Shauq 14 June 2009

To make an impression, You would be little me with disgrace, Laugh at my misfortunes Purposely get in my face. well written... heart feeling one and rich is idea... expression is impressive and the way you wrote is perfect...well done 10++++++++

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Anup Chandar 12 April 2010

Wow! A beautiful piece, I would say! 10+++

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Duh Huh 25 June 2009

Wow, you sure are impresive. Very well done and said. I cant wait to read part 2, thank you for sharing :)

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Shashendra Amalshan 22 June 2009

hi chris! ! ! ! ! ! oh! ! ! you have no idea how glad i m to see..you havnt left PH! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I guess i m not the only one who miss you! ! ! ............. hey this an entertaining write as always Chris....so glad to have you here! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! i thot u r gone 4ever and send a mail, just came to your page at least an old one and found this enterating new one 10++ for this one.... with lots of love and hugs(that's how Barbara Says) i ll add a welcome kiss too! ! ! ! shas

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Ron Flowers 14 June 2009

Hooray for you, Christine. I'm anxious to read part two. Ron

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Dr.subhendu Kar 14 June 2009

How could I give you what you desire, When you forced me to play with fire................ fire has its own reeks by the fight game when played by the anger................quite eloquent write ingenious,10+++, thanks for sharing

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