Behind This Wall Poem by Viola Grey

superb lines, this surreal wall is our inner cloister where if not invaded security will foster

We each have our own 'protective wall'; solid and secure but penatrative if we let down our guard, especially when love invades ones space. Well done -A ten from me.

This has a fantastic rhythm to it, the structure sounds easy, and yet is not uniform. Love the flow. Well done.

I like this poem. It is well written.

To protect or to repel... either one is factual! But man has pride from which comes THIS WALL? High marks.

Sounds like 'once bitten twice shy' - another flowing set of words with a sharp message! Great work Viola. Regards Mark

we all need walls in our life or we would have more Dangers in the word. Becca

Great complexity of thoughts in your poems. Makes the reader stop and think. A '10! ' from me. Best Wishes, Marilyn

A rel good poem, Viola. Ron

Honey drips from honest lips...great line.. a good read... flows beautifully.