Built there to protect...not to repel...
but why on earth would I let you
behind this wall.
The air is sweet with self secure
and honey drips from honest lips,
memories stored in dusty files
bear no weight upon these dreams.
So...why would I allow you to invade
what I'm sure you would crave
if I was to permit you
behind this wall.
24/08/08
Because you are you and when that person scales that wall he will find happiness beyond compare, lovely write Viola 10 Chris
Yes a lovely piece, most walls have doors, and kdoors have keys.But your right why should you. regards Tom 10++
A pretty nice piece, behind the wall is a gem, the true beauty of you...only the heart could see.
Its great in its the truest honesty and it is to be expected from you my Super V. f/f GOD bless, Owen.
Sounds like 'once bitten twice shy' - another flowing set of words with a sharp message! Great work Viola. Regards Mark
we all need walls in our life or we would have more Dangers in the word. Becca
Great complexity of thoughts in your poems. Makes the reader stop and think. A '10! ' from me. Best Wishes, Marilyn
Honey drips from honest lips...great line.. a good read... flows beautifully.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
You heart's wakeful verses.A catchy write.Thank you