Being With You Wasn'T Right Poem by Jeff Fleischer

Being With You Wasn'T Right

Rating: 4.2


Being with you wasn't right,
But it did not stop me every night.
I just kept having all these mixed feelings
As I stared at the four walls and the ceiling.
I knew that your life seemed so unfair.
I want to show you that I cared.
I saw that your broken heart needed mending.
A helping hand, was what I was extending.
You taught me that being kind was something I should do.
That's why I'll always love you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dene Lopez 05 November 2010

This poem is very true and relatable, I love it.

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Chloe Young 28 June 2009

a very true poem, i like real/true poems <3 10

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Carol Gall 02 June 2009

you write with feeling 10

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Linda Winchell 10 November 2008

Good poem of words. Need to, if you are rhyming to contiue with that thought. This was something I was taught early on in my writings. But I loved what you had to say in this piece. God Bless, Linda

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Jeff Fleischer

Jeff Fleischer

Louisville, Kentucky
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