Believe Poem by Daniel Warner

Believe

Rating: 3.3


The way things
are shaping up to be
look like
I only have a slim
chance to be me
and as my childhood dims
I try to see
that I believe in someone
who also believes in me.

The way I think
sounds like a whisper
to my conscience,
but still I try
to block out this nonsense
of this world around me
and I even believe I can achieve
all that isn't promised,
but seems likely to be.

The belief that
I can believe
is rooted in my mind,
but the world decieves
the things I think all the time
and I still journey
farther into my future
with nothing but thoughts
of those beliefs I wish to accomplish.

Believe the belief
that only one can believe in;
a one's personal goal
that is drawn away by sin,
but in turn kept inside your soul
and influences the peoples' kin.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Samantha Rak 13 June 2012

Absolutely amazing! ! Thank you for writing this!

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Neetha Sasidharan 05 May 2012

wow...superb..... i can see so many other poems in this one.......(i know this line doesn't male any sense, but that's wat i felt) .....the rhymes r grt.......the idea too is grt......this is a common thing that haunts d teens....abt their future.......really grt...

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