Believe Poem by Daniel Warner

Believe

Rating: 3.3


The way things
are shaping up to be
look like
I only have a slim
chance to be me
and as my childhood dims
I try to see
that I believe in someone
who also believes in me.

The way I think
sounds like a whisper
to my conscience,
but still I try
to block out this nonsense
of this world around me
and I even believe I can achieve
all that isn't promised,
but seems likely to be.

The belief that
I can believe
is rooted in my mind,
but the world decieves
the things I think all the time
and I still journey
farther into my future
with nothing but thoughts
of those beliefs I wish to accomplish.

Believe the belief
that only one can believe in;
a one's personal goal
that is drawn away by sin,
but in turn kept inside your soul
and influences the peoples' kin.

Wednesday, April 25, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: nonsense,believe
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Samantha Rak 13 June 2012

Absolutely amazing! ! Thank you for writing this!

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Neetha Sasidharan 05 May 2012

wow...superb..... i can see so many other poems in this one.......(i know this line doesn't male any sense, but that's wat i felt) .....the rhymes r grt.......the idea too is grt......this is a common thing that haunts d teens....abt their future.......really grt...

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