Daniel Warner

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With You - Poem by Daniel Warner

I can't go on
my journey is over
now I rest where I belong
because my spirits will never be lower.

You make me feel great
whenever were together
even though our love continues to escalate
always and forever.

With you
is the highlight
of every single day
even though you're not always in my sight
I will love you anyway
because the fires of our hearts
will never fade away.


Comments about With You by Daniel Warner

  • Jais Mani (11/26/2012 9:06:00 AM)


    though a straightforward lv...but nt without certain psychological value........its too gud. (Report) Reply

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  • (11/25/2012 2:46:00 AM)


    I just can't describe it. It's too beautiful for words (Report) Reply

  • Captain Cur (5/16/2012 2:47:00 PM)


    Fires do burn out, that's why we capture them in words and they stay lit in our imaginations.
    Nice piece of writing keep up the good work.
    (Report) Reply

  • Lily Dawn (5/15/2012 9:13:00 AM)


    Thats amazing. If only a guy loved me like that. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, May 12, 2012



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