Heartless Poem by Daniel Warner

Heartless

Rating: 3.5


You never told me
to take care
because now I see
your heart was never there.

I met you
and thought to myself
that I could love you, too,
but you only cared about yourself.

I looked for your heart
your soul,
but could find nothing in the start,
but a single lump of coal.

So I looked
and looked
still nothing came,
but a hole of complete darkness
and the thought of me being the blame.

I tried even looking onward;
past this dreadful shrew,
but I was only looking toward
a heart that never grew.

I cannot leave her
I lie to you not
because I know I'm the cure
to this heartless plot.

Then I began
to find a lost cause
because to infect my heart was your plan
I still lie to you not,
but now I lay my head to rest
and my heart begins to rot.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Katherine Bryce 13 May 2012

Wow. I really felt a lot in this poem. I felt your pain. I know where this is coming from. A really powerful piece!

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Lily Dawn 15 May 2012

: o that explains everything! Thank you

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_unknown_ 26 December 2017

Soo dark nd wonderful The ri8 kind of poem i prefer

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Bella Hernandez 18 December 2012

WOW! a lot of emotion! a feeling that can be related to. you have a great gift! keep it up! keep writing how you feel. that is amazing! (i relate to this poem very much) ~Bella

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Zerozero Fiftyseven 28 November 2012

You put alot of emotionate in it. It's quite amazing. Keep it up.: -)

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Emily Oldham 14 July 2012

Very stark and honest. You really can feel the emotion in this. Thanks for sharing

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Arline Richards 16 May 2012

wow this is dark but i love it

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