Daniel Warner

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Heartless - Poem by Daniel Warner

You never told me
to take care
because now I see
your heart was never there.

I met you
and thought to myself
that I could love you, too,
but you only cared about yourself.

I looked for your heart
your soul,
but could find nothing in the start,
but a single lump of coal.

So I looked
and looked
still nothing came,
but a hole of complete darkness
and the thought of me being the blame.

I tried even looking onward;
past this dreadful shrew,
but I was only looking toward
a heart that never grew.

I cannot leave her
I lie to you not
because I know I'm the cure
to this heartless plot.

Then I began
to find a lost cause
because to infect my heart was your plan
I still lie to you not,
but now I lay my head to rest
and my heart begins to rot.

Comments about Heartless by Daniel Warner

  • (12/18/2012 3:37:00 PM)

    WOW! a lot of emotion! a feeling that can be related to. you have a great gift! keep it up! keep writing how you feel. that is amazing! (i relate to this poem very much)
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  • Kerri Reid (11/28/2012 5:31:00 PM)

    You put alot of emotionate in it. It's quite amazing. Keep it up.: -) (Report) Reply

  • Emily Oldham (7/14/2012 11:29:00 AM)

    Very stark and honest. You really can feel the emotion in this. Thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Arline Richards (5/16/2012 11:18:00 PM)

    wow this is dark but i love it (Report) Reply

  • Lily Dawn (5/15/2012 9:18:00 AM)

    : o that explains everything! Thank you (Report) Reply

  • Katherine Bryce (5/13/2012 8:58:00 PM)

    Wow. I really felt a lot in this poem. I felt your pain. I know where this is coming from. A really powerful piece! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, May 5, 2012

Poem Edited: Saturday, May 5, 2012

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