Daniel Warner

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One Wish - Poem by Daniel Warner

If I had one wish
I would give it to you
because I know
I'd be the one you'd give it to.

So, I wish for you
to keep the wish I give
because I know
without each other; we can't live.

If you had one wish
what would it be
because I know mine is you and me,
forever,
for all eternity.


Comments about One Wish by Daniel Warner

  • _unknown_ (12/26/2017 2:30:00 PM)

    Exquisite with right poetic techniques. (Report)Reply

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  • Sandra Feldman (11/28/2012 5:25:00 PM)

    Poetically, beautiful in it's simplicity., surprisingly romantic for our rotten times, SF (Report)Reply

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  • Jais ManiJais Mani (11/26/2012 9:07:00 AM)

    full of intense passion....... (Report)Reply

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  • Lily DawnLily Dawn (5/15/2012 9:17:00 AM)

    Do you have a girl you write these for? how to do you do it man! (Report)Reply

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  • Katherine BryceKatherine Bryce (5/13/2012 9:00:00 PM)

    AWE! Such a beautiful write! (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 8, 2012

Poem Edited: Thursday, December 27, 2012


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