Beneath Our Feet Poem by ivor or ivor.e hogg

Beneath Our Feet

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Great caverns formed by Natures hand
transformed into a wonderland
When man provides electric light
highlighting every stalagmite
and stalagtite for our delight.

Stray chips of quartz reflecting back.
Pin points of light against the black
dark shadowed rocky walls. Like eyes
their colours take you by surprise
they coruscate like fireflies.

This beauty had been seldom seen
except by potholers who are keen
to tread where no one trod before
Pioneers who choose to explore
the hidden depths which they adore.

The hardy men who found the way
to wonders we can view today.
They had to crawl we walk upright
their way was dark but we have light.
Revealing wonders to our sight.

I wonder why Dame nature hid
these caverns in the way she did
and if we were intended to
follow up each subtle clue.
A task which very few could do.

Although wild creatures knew the way.
The bats which shun the light of day
have roosted here for centuries.
They come and go just as they please
by hidden ways that no man sees.

18-Mar-08

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mary Gordley 23 March 2008

Ivor you certainly have a knack for plumbing the secret places where fresh subjects for poetry hide. This was a very enjoyable read and I thank you.

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Ernestine Northover 22 March 2008

Brilliant Ivor, a wonderful explanation of the caverns which are so fascinating to see. Lovely write, I really enjoyed reading this one, you have constructed it so very well. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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