Best Place

Rating: 4.5

It was a long route...
Very long route indeed,
The great traveller was walking
With true energy and elan,
After travelling the whole day,
The traveller became very tired and exhausted,
So he took shelter at night at an inn,
Being weary, soon he fell deep asleep there,
Then he met a great stranger in his pleasant dream,
The stranger asked the wayfarer,
"Where do you want to reach? "
The eminent traveller boldly answered,
"I want to reach the best place of the world; "
Hearing this, the brilliant stranger smiled
And encouraged the famous traveller saying,
"It's still a long way to go, dear friend!
But if you continue to walk with true determination,
You will surely reach the place in time."

Sunday, June 7, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: journey
Varsha M 07 June 2020

Beautifully written story of a traveller seeking his final destination. Good work.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 07 June 2020

ha ha ha lol we all dream such things AAAAAAAAAARRRRR ji

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Ratnakar Mandlik 07 June 2020

Determination and consistent efforts will definitely lead a person towards the best. Thanks for sharing such a wonderful dream.10 points.

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Sylvia FC 07 June 2020

Very impressive poem. Thank you so much for sharing, best wishes from The Netherlands, Sylvia Frances Chan

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Sylvia FC 07 June 2020

True determination is the best option to reach the Best Place. Amazing! .

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