Betrayal Poem by Lexy Ruth

Betrayal

Rating: 5.0


You can't save a man from himself
betrayal in the bone
a friendly enemy i see
a believable lair
an unbelievable backstabber
stabbed so bad i thought i'll die
pains so unbearable
trust seems rare
value seems less
you seemed so nice
you played so wise
unconsciously brought me down
with a great smile on your face
a heartless you i believe
i'll get back up to prove me strong
a sentimental fool i see

Tuesday, February 6, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: hurt,sad
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 29 September 2019

Deep hurtful feelings of betrayal are aptly captured in the piece. Very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing.

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Jazib Kamalvi 12 February 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Lexy. You may like to read my poem, Love And. Thank you.

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Israj Ali 07 February 2018

Very nice written poem- - balance elements- very good topic

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