nicole webster


Betrayed - Poem by nicole webster

the man i love and trust betrayed me and my heart broke, i just dont no what to think anymore has our relationship all bin a joke. you ripped away all my self worth, i know you dont realise it cause you said sorry but what you said it really hurt. you say i love you everyday, i had no doubt in this until today, you basically told me i wasnt hot, i can say it but you can not. i dont want to say anything and cause any greif, so im writing this poem not that its given any releif.
on the way home i looked in the mirror and i think maybe you were on point, with what you said,
I feel totally empty, I feel like my mind is dead. can someone stop me from going insane, my heart has been ripped out and i feel so much pain. i feel like im going to vomit, my guts tied in knots, and now i think what if someone hotter comes along will your heart runaway, i know you say im sexy everyday, but now i am seriously afraid, i love you with all my heart and i long to be with you til death do us part, and when we part if there is something more i will be waiting to be with you once again forever and more, cause i honestly couldnt imagaine my life without you, now i sit here and wonder if u feel the same as i do. now its up to me to try and rise up after being struck down so many times, now enough with this pethetic rhyme. i leave with just one questions for the books, how could you make a woman forget her looks.

by nicole webster

Topic(s) of this poem: betrayal, love, self image, women


Comments about Betrayed by nicole webster

  • Nicole Marie (9/12/2015 6:34:00 AM)


    i thank you all for your comments i thought with how many poems are on this page know one would see it. i have bin going through some of the stuff use have written and there is some amazing poems i have read over and over again. i used to write poems all the time growing up until i started getting teased so i stopped writting and hid them away, this is the first poem i have written in many years and im glad i shared it as it as encouraged and inspired me to continue writing (Report) Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Chinedu Dike (9/10/2015 5:59:00 PM)


    A well articulated piece of poetry that depicts distress and disappointment in bliss of love. A lovely poem nicely penned from the heart. Thanks for sharing Nicole. Please read my poem THE OBSESSIVE AGONY OF LUST. (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (8/31/2015 11:13:00 AM)


    Although you said that writing this did not help give any relief, I encourage you to keep writing. It actually does help to unburden.
    Peace
    (Report) Reply

  • Fabrizio Frosini (8/31/2015 5:49:00 AM)


    or, again:

    '' Love is a familiar; love is a devil: there is no evil angel but love '' (Love's Labour's Lost, Act I, Scene II)

    Love often makes both the best and the worst of our life..
    (Report) Reply

  • Fabrizio Frosini (8/31/2015 5:45:00 AM)


    ''Oh, injurious love, that respites me a life, whose very comfort is still a dying horror''
    Shakespeare, Measure for Measure, Act II, Scene III
    (Report) Reply

  • Soul Watcher (8/31/2015 3:05:00 AM)


    It's really heart touching poem, with very sad words, I hope it's just a poem and not a really story happened.
    But, I believe that our life won't stop due to someone left us, even if he has been everything in our life. Absolutely it will hurt so much, but we need to be strong enough to get up again to start our life again, to reform our broken feelings.
    Best Wishes.
    Thanks for sharing the poems with us.
    (Report) Reply

Read all 6 comments »



Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags


Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 30, 2015



[Report Error]