Saturday, December 21, 2013

Better Check Your Heart Comments

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My eyes saw her face with utter delight,
Ears heard her singing that mighty did please,
My head nodded in passion's speeding flight,
Her ways and wit to reason were fresh breeze,
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Akhtar Jawad 24 August 2019

A wonderful poem on a heart in love.

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Aniruddha Pathak 24 August 2019

Thank you Akhtar saa'b, what I wrote below also applies to you. Your appreciation goes a long way.

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 August 2019

She was mine! ! ! Love and art, To dine with her; But, all ended one day! Heartbreak, Lost love, She was mine. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aniruddha Pathak 24 August 2019

I feel happy to have two readers who had something to say on this 2008 poem, thanks so much

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Aniruddha Pathak

Aniruddha Pathak

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