Monday, March 31, 2008

Better, Together & Forever (Part 1) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Love.
Indeed the strongest word ever.
Love + You = Our Life Together.
Now I know it's obvious.
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Michael Smith
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Cleon Barrett 02 May 2008

Nice poem Mike part 1 and 2 is tough...the onlii think i would revise here is the 3rd line make it seem like a math problem more by saying Love + You = my life together prt 1 n 2 of this poem is tough though

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Pandora Chaos 31 March 2008

Wow! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! this poem is really good. i give it a 10/10 ~TORN IN TWO BY THE 1 I LOVE~ A-K-A Victoria Emo Girl

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