Better, Together & Forever (Part 1) Poem by Michael Smith

Better, Together & Forever (Part 1)

Rating: 5.0


Love.
Indeed the strongest word ever.
Love + You = Our Life Together.
Now I know it's obvious.
That you love me more than ever.
Let's cut the small talk & be together.
On a candlelit evening.
I imagine us together.
Happiness & good weather.
All the good times with you get better & better.
But the bad times with you.
I'm still glad that we're together.
So love me in the morning, noon, and the evening.
Forever.
Always stay true to this.
And we'll always be together.

3/31/08

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cleon Barrett 02 May 2008

Nice poem Mike part 1 and 2 is tough...the onlii think i would revise here is the 3rd line make it seem like a math problem more by saying Love + You = my life together prt 1 n 2 of this poem is tough though

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Pandora Chaos 31 March 2008

Wow! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! this poem is really good. i give it a 10/10 ~TORN IN TWO BY THE 1 I LOVE~ A-K-A Victoria Emo Girl

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