Between The Raindrops Poem by Vanessa Hernandez

Between The Raindrops

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dancing around in this wet abyss
with puddles around my feet
as the rain falls from the clouds above
i am in a world as beautiful as life;

as i spin blissfully
jumping around in joy
a little skip here and a little hop there
nothing can disturb this tranquil peace;

when nothing in life seem to go right,
never quite sure what tomorrow might bring,
knowing everything is for a reason,
the only thing that I can do is be my self;

as my fingers reach out to the falling raindrops,
i smile as i watch the rain come down,
softly sprinkling on my skin
alluring my senses into spring awaking;

as i surrender to the beauty of rain,
swimming in a sea of serenity,
a blanket of warmth surrounds me
as I fade into the darkness
letting my mind set itself free;

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Renganathan 11 July 2009

Relieving the perturbed mind free....a happy heart sings 10

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Kesav Easwaran 09 July 2009

i am able to visualise a rain soaked heart here...a heart that's blissfully poetic...thanks Vanessa...10

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