A Lonely Tear Poem by Vanessa Hernandez

A Lonely Tear

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A lonely tear falls down
A smile turns into a frown
Trickles down the cheek
doesn't it make you weak

A lonly tear escapes.
A lifetime of mistakes.
A sad lonely heart
that others broke apart

A lonely tear is dried
So many nights it cried
A friend reached out their hand
And tried to understand

The lonely tear is gone
Life will carry on
With love from a friend
The lonely tears will end

Indira Renganathan 24 June 2009

Emotional tear..at the end to realise the value of love to free from somberness...good poem

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Kesav Easwaran 20 June 2009

'The lonely tear is gone Life will carry on'... Positive thinking there Vanessa...wise...life has to witness so many dawns...brighter than the ones that set Good poem...the words bring out the emotions inside in a most sober and subdued tone

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Emily Oldham 02 November 2008

a mass of feelings are in this poem........... nice........ i like it, thanks Athena *** words will change the world ***

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Manonton Dalan 26 August 2008

wow full of feelings.... i could imagine

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May Namoc 16 August 2008

a wonderful poem. thank you for sharing such a wonderful write! all someone needs is a friend and for the moment, i'm sure the bad things will end. if only for a moment. **10**

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