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Between The Two

Rating: 5.0

one man wanted my heart
the other made it bleed
one man made me smile
the other made me plead

one took me for granted
while the other was fair
one man kept me crying
the other really cared

one man hurt me badly
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Will Barber 30 April 2006

This is wonderful. You balanced tragedy and humor very effectively.

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Ben Banda 16 November 2005

I hope the men didnt return for Xmas and happy new year. the piece makes me wish to see the other men who wanted/prayed for your bliss and who stayed by you in june... thanx Liz for the suspence, i hope i will hang to death softly.

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Charles Chaim Wax 06 November 2005

at last a love poem not filled with despair unhappiness gloom just a lovely trip with bouncing eyes

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