Between Your Lines Poem by Ann ...

Between Your Lines

Rating: 5.0


O, my sweetness,
you
are my poem.

first, so distant
and
so rigid

but beyond the
strict
formalities,

and beyond the
form,
and the rhyme,

and the meter
lies
your inherent truth,

so glorious
in
its subtlety.

our beauty is
found
in the breakdown.

please let me live
in
between your lines.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Matthew Senne 07 December 2007

this inspires writing

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Hazem Al Jaber 31 March 2007

very, , very beautiful and stunning right..

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A. Michael Sears 29 March 2007

Yes! 'Our beauty lies in our breakdown.' A very solid piece, wonderfully done.

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Declan McHenry 27 March 2007

A clever piece Ann. Finely delivered.

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