Kumarmani Mahakul

Gold Star - 393,785 Points (Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA)

Beyond Golden Realm - Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

You travel oh dear soul,
Sitting in chariot of meditation,
You travel spreading your own light,
To overcome trillions of universes,
Beyond trillions of galaxies,
Crossing the infinite boundary
Guarded by dark matters in space,
You travel with sun of dusk,
Twisting branches, plants are wishing,
Grass is wishing you all the best,
Trees are adoring your golden path,
You are empowered by golden wisdom,
You do not do late, you do not do late,
Oh dear soul, you awaken soon,
Sun is burning final wood of gold,
You have to travel beyond golden realm!

Sun is God's messenger for our universe,
We find energy frequently in this path,
After sun will set and night will come,
You will see the real black magic of space,
You can feel very well the darkness beyond,
How dark matters scatter and planets are hung,
How stars dazzle with twinkling faces,
You can watch the wonderful scene,
But you have to travel more and more,
Crossing the distance of
Trillions of light years,
Still you have to travel beyond
You have to travel infinite distance,
Beyond Golden realm of our God,
To meet him there as he is our father,
You are Soul, he is Supreme Soul!

Watching this dusk you realize,
Sunrise ends with sunset each day,
But sun rises at every new dawn,
You pass through birth and death,
But you never die at all,
Like flower you bloom,
Like petals your body wilts,
You leave your body and go,
But still you exist and travel,
Oh dear soul, you feel this truth,
Like sun you smile and meditate,
You are son of God, you are point of light,
You are like sun of dawn and dusk,
God has empowered you by true wisdom!
Holding the golden rays in hand,
Beyond Golden Realm you travel!


© Kumarmani Mahakul,16 October 2019. All rights reserved.

Topic(s) of this poem: galaxy, god, philosophical , soul, spiritual

Form: Free Verse


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Cover photo © Kumarmani Mahakul,30 October 2017. All rights reserved.

Comments about Beyond Golden Realm by Kumarmani Mahakul

  • Geeta Radhakrishna Menon (10/29/2019 11:04:00 PM)

    Like flower you bloom,
    Like petals your body wilts,
    You leave your body and go,
    But still you exist and travel,
    Oh dear soul, you feel this truth,
    Like sun you smile and meditate!
    A soulful poem so beautifully written, Kumarmani ji .........10
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  • Savita Tyagi (10/25/2019 6:16:00 PM)

    Beyond golden realm travels our soul. In its eternity it it part of Supreme Being...a spiritual thread tying our lower being to this wider Cosmos. Beautifully narrated spiritual poem. Thank you Kumarmani Ji for sharing it with us. (Report)Reply

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  • Anil Kumar Panda (10/20/2019 9:14:00 AM)

    A great philosophical poem on immortal soul. It comes with a new garb in each birth. Nothing can destroy it.

    'Like flower you bloom,
    Like petals your body wilts,
    You leave your body and go,
    But still you exist and travel, '... is very nice. Enjoyed thoroughly.10++
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  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (10/19/2019 7:05:00 AM)

    Journey of the soul beautifully contemplated with sun on the horizon. Thanks for sharing. (Report)Reply

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  • Bharati Nayak (10/18/2019 8:03:00 AM)

    Watching this dusk you realize,
    Sunrise ends with sunset each day,
    But sun rises at every new dawn,
    You pass through birth and death,
    But you never die at all,
    Like flower you bloom,
    - - - - - - I bow to your golden pen.Thank you.
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  • Bharati Nayak (10/18/2019 8:00:00 AM)

    You travel with sun of dusk,
    Twisting branches, plants are wishing,
    Grass is wishing you all the best,
    Trees are adoring your golden path,
    You are empowered by golden wisdom, - - - - Wow- -This poem takes us along abundant spiritual bliss.Thanks for this wonderful poem.
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  • Aniruddha Pathak (10/17/2019 6:30:00 AM)

    Beyond Golden Realm..
    It describes soul's journey over many a life time,
    over millions of miles to regain His Golden Realm,
    as always in his unique style.
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  • Edward Kofi Louis (10/17/2019 4:55:00 AM)

    Oh dear soul! ! ! !
    Facing the muse of the galaxies! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
    Beyond Golden Realm.


    Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
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  • (10/17/2019 2:19:00 AM)

    For me this poem is a completely philosophical poem that reflects knowledge of the poet beyond galaxy and a powerful imagination motivates his mind. Souls' travel is a reality. Soul travels in cosmos and he is son of God. This is a great write and I completely agree with Valsa George. (Report)Reply

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  • Valsa George (10/16/2019 11:18:00 PM)

    Still you have to travel beyond
    You have to travel infinite distance,
    Beyond Golden realm of our God

    The soul's journey to God is beautifully and poetically delineated in this poem. The soul after leaving the body is imagined to be travelling a long distance beyond the sky and the galaxies to reach the blissful golden realm of God. The diction is beautiful and the theme is impressive. Top marks
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 16, 2019

Poem Edited: Tuesday, October 29, 2019


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