The Wind blows
The Tree bows
The leaves sweep the floor.
But as of now... it grows.
There is a stillness the storm cannot find,
Leaving the fear of the fall behind,
Until the Divine final blow.
It took me a few times to read this poem over to fully grasp its worth! Such powerful imagery employed to communicate eternal truth! Makes it to my favorites!
An important poem with deep and profound implications! Well written! Thank you for this piece!
The closure line delivers an impactful message. Liked the picture that goes with this great poem.
Thank you, Rose. I intended to make the poem a bit lengthier, but after the first 6 lines, I felt the need to conclude it; what I did.
A very stirring poem...so thought provoking. Seven brilliant lines so well executed with superb imagery. To my favorites!
After all, I am happy to convey a powerful message through those lines.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A poem that stretches the mind.