Bicycle Comments

A Fantastic poem... Main aankh milata hoon woh aankh churati hay, Do pahion ki gari per rangeen si halchal hay. Beautiful way you have compared bicycle to life. This poem rhymes very well and enjoyed reading it. This was a Fantastic start... Loved reading it.

is halchal ne jawani ko harkat me laai hai... do pahion par sahi zindagi to muskaraadi hai.... ishaaron me sahi vaada e umeed to hai... aapke is najm se us gari pe sawaar dil bekarar zaroor hai....

it was a good start indeed...................after a long time we are lucky to read these lines................

Ankhon main naye sapne lahrte machalte hayn, beautifully expressed the experiences of bicycle. While we newly learn to ride it is really memorable. Beautiful poem.