Big Loaf Of Love Poem by Vishal Sharma

Big Loaf Of Love

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Separation
painfull
for both of us
remain together
not in fate
thus i hate
my destiny
my fortune
my biggest enemy
with many
broke me
totally
peacefully
painfully
though
hungry am i
god has snatched
a big loaf of love
from my mouth

Friday, May 17, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: separation
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hazel Durham 18 May 2013

Love this poem full of heartache but fate knows seperation is the only way forward! Great title!

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Ambrosia A 17 May 2013

Lovely write. God, who has given us this love, may snatch and can bestow with a better one as well. So keep moving......

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