Bittersweet Love. Poem by Fay Slimm

Bittersweet Love.

Rating: 4.9


Your sweet golden darts
............................... penetrate my soul.
They strike any shadows,
................................... cull and replace
My fears, and inject
.....................your warm declared love.

Let who will condemn me,
................................... I have found joy,
Yet bittersweet, but
.......................... know love's repeated
Longing will sing
....................... its own dear symphony.

One day, when fleshed,
......................... love's coveted desire
Will fire us into destiny,
............................... and - - bonded
For eternity - - -
........................... our love will survive.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Andrew mark Wilkinson 27 September 2009

Poetry and love lift the soul ever higher :) 10

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Eyan Desir 27 September 2009

The flow was sweet as the poem itself 10s

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Carol Gall 20 September 2009

golden darts excellent fay 10

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Catrina Heart 20 September 2009

Oh for eternity love will survive.....well bonded well framed.great poem Fay! ! ! 10+++

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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