Alyssa Lippi

Black Actions

The black freezes solid
hard as ice
Time stops
Motionless I stand
Enveloped by the crystalic rain
Forced to face the RIOT
I myself have become
things my mind never imagined
have become all too Real
My skin, , tainted with past memories
and of what is yet to come, ,
tingles and forever more longs for your presence
never will i or want to break this addiction
your burning venom pierces my flesh
, , fills my veins, ,
in the mirror i reflect an image
i dont recognize myself
you have overcome me
a slave i have become
no longer does pure breath pass through my lungs
, , corrupted, ,
i am
and i find you
forever lingering
beneath the surface
changing me, morphing me
with your...
Black Actions

Poem Submitted: Thursday, March 25, 2010
Poem Edited: Thursday, April 15, 2010

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Comments about Black Actions by Alyssa Lippi

  • Denise Bekker ~* The Sound *~ (7/16/2010 9:53:00 AM)

    Black actions...deceitful manifestations from the heart. So well penned, captivating read! ; D

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  • Alyce Haeven (4/28/2010 4:24:00 PM)

    now THIS is something that people would add to there favorites! ! well done! !

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  • Jack Simone (4/23/2010 1:53:00 PM)

    I really enjoyed this one. Seems like you put a lot into it.10/10

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  • Lynn Glover (4/19/2010 6:55:00 PM)

    A very impressive poem written with almost life like action, you drew me into the poem as a good poet will do. You did an outstanding job on structure and flow. I give you a 10. Verrrrrry Goooood. Your friend Lynn

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  • Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner (4/19/2010 2:03:00 PM)

    you got such good comments on this..what else can i say.. but as you asked for it i can only say that..keep writing..'coz i know that the best is yet to come and for me it's too close but not that..

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  • Adrian Cordova (4/17/2010 10:21:00 AM)

    10/10, it's really dark, and yet it shows it's not all you that's dark, the is perfectly written in ways of 'Goth' poetry, and a good poem in any other poetry genre

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  • Rinki Nandy (4/12/2010 12:51:00 AM)

    that was really b; lack..

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  • Christopher Tiganescu (4/9/2010 3:12:00 PM)

    wow that was amazing it seemed almost perfect good job!

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  • The Jesus Of Suburbia Is A LieThe Jesus Of Suburbia Is A Lie (4/7/2010 12:40:00 PM)

    oh my! WHY U DIDNT KEEP ON WRITING....it was such a good flo with perfect words.....

    pls....try to write more here, , , , it's such a good piece...

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