Black Shadow Comments
Trapped in the stoop, beggin' for a bowl of soup.
Colder than a dog, lost in the fog.
Thought I had it all, guess I was wrong.
Owls on the tree's, wolves on their knees.
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This Is A Great Poem... It's Very Imaginative and Also Could Be An Allegory, Like A Symbolic Way Of Seeing Life In A Hard Way & Time of One's Life... But The Beauty Of Your Young Soul Is Ever Brave and Filled With Hope With Each Word... Liked It... You And Rosa Banks (another Young, Talented Poet Such As Yourself, Should Meet In Reading - smile) ... Poet-Pal, MoonBee
The words stir up, to me, an unfortunate person living alone in the shadows of the night. Abstract in a way. Nice write.
I really like this poem. it makes me think of when i was a little girl walking in the woods! ! This poem is GREAT! !
What wonderful magical imagery you have conjured with this poem! Nice measured rhythm as well as rhyme and I particularly love the final line.10+
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3/15/2026 11:18:51 PM # 1.0.0
Yes I liked your poem.................