patrick o'shaughnessy

Rookie - 0 Points (09/12/92 / merced california)

Blah - Poem by patrick o'shaughnessy

Im a middle class white teen
i dont own a single care
about the world or its hunger
or the people in dispair

because im a strange species
the one they cant understand
i do not obey their orders
i do not obey their commands

all the world goes blah blah blah
yelling in my ear
telling me im so strange
that im their biggest fear

but they walked inside my shoes
they've been in my place
they had my hands and feet
they even had my face

cause im a middle class white kid
and i make the whole world scared
cause they think i wont make it
they think im unprepared


Comments about Blah by patrick o'shaughnessy

  • Mike Monahan (4/20/2011 1:19:00 PM)


    enjoyed that Patrick. Will read more of your stuff soon! working on screenplay! regards Mike (Report) Reply

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  • (5/24/2010 12:20:00 PM)


    good poem, i think we all felt like that at that age, : 0) (Report) Reply

  • (5/20/2010 11:06:00 AM)


    i likes it (:
    they can all fall down a well.....& they looked just like u? ? ....CLONENESSSSS
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, May 5, 2010

Poem Edited: Friday, May 20, 2011


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