Ames Sunshine


Blank Page - Poem by Ames Sunshine

The page is clear
The sheet is blank
it's just waiting to be written on

What will I write
What will I feel
What will I be willing to reveal

Emotions, emotions
depressed, happy or sad.
maybe even violent, mad, or glad.

What will the ink show
Will it just easily flow
The world will never be sure to know

This will probably never be shared
because hardly anyone would care

Who would want to read this page
and to my innermost thoughts be engaged

You never know what will in the end come out
No one knows what the conclusion to the story will be about

Everyday is a blank page
How are you filling your canvas?

I hope mine are filled with smiles and inspiration
and I hope that every page will be a joyous occasion

I wonder when my last page will be
and what I'll write about
I wonder what final last emotions will come out.


Comments about Blank Page by Ames Sunshine

  • (2/3/2007 7:41:00 AM)

    Heyo. I've read two of your poems in total, and I feel that they're both really nice! I liked this one better though, thus I choose to leave my comment here.

    Firstly, I like your title. Hahs. 'Blank page' is an intriguing title, and i think that if I was actually choosing a poem from the list of poem titles, it would prove to be a much more captivating choice. This title gives a mysterious and unknown atmosphere to the poem that makes me want to read it.

    Also, I had rather liked the line in this poem that went:

    'Everyday is a blank page
    How are you filling your canvas? '

    It gives an added emotional feel to top up the poem. It's also a beautiful line, that expresses a feel even without a speaker. Like it lotts.

    Some ways in which you could improve would be perhaps trying to change your phrasing of the words so that it dosent occasionally lapse into the style of lyrics. Other than that, I would say that you're not bad, not bad at all, buddy.

    Hope you continue writing and contribute your beautiful phrases for the world to enjoy!
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  • (1/31/2007 12:41:00 PM)

    i realy loooooove it
    ur so honest
    i love that
    keep going

    best wishes with blue roses
    crystal
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, January 31, 2007

Poem Edited: Thursday, January 6, 2011


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