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Blatant Hurt Me

Rating: 4.7

You hurt me.
Presently, not in the past.
You hurt me.
Your clawed words burn to slash.

You hurt me.
Your confidence ruins mine.
You hurt me.
Where do you find the time?

You hurt me.
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Con Nie 21 May 2008

Good expression of hurt here.The line about 'never a tear in your eye' reminds me of some people who hurt others and just never feel pain for doing so. There is a saying about 'hurt people, hurt people' and so I try to stay away from the hurting ones. But we do live on planet earth so we are bound to be hurt by others. We just need to let go of the hurt so we can enjoy our lives today. Then we don't become one of those 'hurt people, who hurt people.' Gave your poem a ten! Good job. Sincerely, Connie Webb

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Working Title 14 September 2007

Repetetive...but how else can you express it? I relate to this poem right now and if I weren't trying to move on, I would say just this to someone. Thanks :)

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