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Sky-Minded

Rating: 3.6

Blue sky,
blue sky.

Looking at you, wishing the day by.

Blue sky,
purple sky.

Storm coming in, here it is, there's the eye.

Blue sky,
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Loyloy 05 January 2018

I myself should say that you did a great job on starting and ending your poem. And to get to the point, I like the way you describe the color of different skies you see with your own eyes each day.

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Jasbir Chatterjee 29 November 2015

I love the last line, It's only in my mind. Disasters can befall anyone, but how we handle them is what matters; Yes, I agree; we need to be sky-minded, look at the broader picture. Thanks for sharing.

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Souren Mondal 29 November 2015

A very interesting poem with symbolic implications.. Thanks for sharing..

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Rahman Henry 29 November 2015

Black sky Green sky Orange sky Red sky Pink and yellow and mean sky.

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Rajnish Manga 29 November 2015

Amazing expression of sentiments through the colours of sky. Great articulation. I quote: Pink and yellow and mean sky / Black sky / Green sky / Orange sky / Red sky / Pink and yellow and mean sky / Come on and roll in; it's only in my mind.

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 November 2015

Swallowed stars! ! With the works of nature. Nice work.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 29 November 2015

Superb poem. Displayed bubbling enthusiasm and naughtiness in narrating motley shades of hues encompassed in the sky in poet's imaginations. Enjoyed the poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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M Asim Nehal 29 November 2015

In a unique style you said many things in this short poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Anil Kumar Panda 29 November 2015

Nicely done about different colors of the sky and their significance.

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Katie Edwards 18 March 2008

From The 1st year media students of Newcastle College - Newcastle-upon-tyne, North East England. We liked your poem so much we made a one minute film based on your poem. Here is the link http: //www.youtube.com/watch? v=721CosROrFs youtube.com - search MediaBits - Sky minded

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